TO: Idaho
FROM: Brian
Long
DATE: 6/17
RE: Tracking
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You guys have put together
a really sting, dramatic, emotionally-involving record. The production is full
and complimentary to the songs. I also really like the varying keys the songs
are in; this helps with the record’s flow.
Anyway, after listening to
the tape a bunch of times while watching pigeons swoop after dogs, on the loose
from their master’s penthouses, this is what I’ve come up with as a good tracking order.
“God’s Green Earth” - a nice and positive way to kick off the record, Really cool, uplifting
song.
“Skyscraper” - it’s always good to put one of the absolute best
tracks in the first or second spot.
“Gone” - cool acoustic guitar intro which sets up the mood
change from “Skyscraper” and then,..bam.!
“Here To Go” -
emotionally compelling as Jeff goes for it. Great song! One idea I’d like for you guys to seriously consider
is to shorten the “tagged on” ending from “Gone” by mixing up the intro
from “Here To Go” as the end of “Gone” fades out. This will help tighten up the
record and create a neat seamless section which will augment two songs which will
prove to be one of the album's highlights.
"Memorial Day" -
This song has a resolution/healing quality that works better
after an emotionally-laden song than at the beginning of the album. It's
also a bit too long to kick the album off with. Following the one-two punch
of "Gone" & "Here To Go" this
song would make more of an impact and help lead the listener
through the record.
"Creep" •
As this song begins cold with the voice why don't you
lead into it with some ambient sound that butts right up to the
beginning of the song. Again, this will help tight-up the album. I also believe
this should be in the first half of the record as it will
be a song some gatekeepers will be familiar with, i.e., radio,
retail...
"John #1" - as I told
John, this song has a real pleasant quality. It reminds me
of chilling on a redwood patio and feeling quite content. I think Pete Townshend had a song about this
state of mind with the line "...exquisitely bored in
California" A great middle of the record type song.
(Side 2 of cassette)
"Star" - the acoustic lead-in lends itself well to beginning a
side and it works equally well as song in the middle of the album.
"The Only Road" • Heavy duty dirge
with awesome guitar sounds and grinding bottom end -- un-relenting and
hypnotic.
"One Sunday" - Where the hell did you pull this song out
of Jeff? I wish it wasn't so short as its a nice.
Is that a girl singing backup on the "Just to get out" line?
This works well behind "The Only Road" as it is a good contrast.
"Save" - Keeping that
major key thing happening at this point in the album will help keep
listeners. I love the guitars on this one.
"Sundown" - maybe some short
ambience leading into this one as its mood is funereal yet beautiful... that
beautiful aching thing.
"Endgame" - I've always thought this as the perfect
last song and not just because of the title. The pan shifting and Jeff’s sexy
and understated vocals are chilling. As the last song, it will leave the
listener under the Idaho's spell - gorgeous song!
As you know, with all these songs it is a long album. Ideally, I'd like
to trim two
songs from it. One of the biggest criticisms American Music Club and Red House Painters
received on their latest albums is that they are too long. Why give people
something to dis; psychologically it's better to
leave people wanting more. It's of primary importance to the U.K. to have two unreleased
tracks or they won’t release a single as well it is wise to have tracks
floating around for promotional CDs, CD magazines etc.
Anyway, you guys have done a great job and I’m sure your
very proud of it.
Hats off.
I’ll talk with you next week.
CC: Kim & Erin